I'm really pleased Greyback seems so creepy! I always think the implication of what someone is like or could do is usually far worse than what they actually do. And I like the idea of him being simple intellectually, but very cunning because there's no rules he'll abide to.

I do think this was the ultimate Catch 22 situation for Remus; confronted by his personal nemesis, and continually hamstrung by the fact that it is his own humanity that defeats him. Having done this shortie here, I would love to have them playing some more cat and mouse stuff sometime. I'd have to find a way to let Remus best him somehow, though I think the interesting thing then would be the cost of that...

Many thanks. Glad you liked it!:D