http://drumher.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] drumher.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] gilpin25 2008-08-05 02:44 pm (UTC)

– don't cross your arms like that, I’m trying to concentrate -

LOL!

Good job! Dialogue-only pieces tend to become confusing after awhile. You know, trying to keep track of whom is speaking (for me, at least). But I had no trouble here and my over-active imagination was able to flesh out the lovely visuals you created. Like, sleep sexy Remus. :)

Looking forward to cuddle bunny popping up in later offerings from you.

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