I love it. It's honestly - and not just because it's mine, although they would in any case add an extra level to my affection for it - one of my favourite pieces of yours and just of R/T, period. You always write these three, Remus, Tonks and Sirius so well. The dialogue in particular is always perfect. The male/female differences come through so clearly and so do the different personalities behind their speech. This era is my absolute favourite in fic, when Remus and Tonks were stumbling toward each other and Sirius was looking on with envious amusement. Which is exactly how it happened behind the scenes in canon, in my head. Remus is so hesistant and lovely and affectionate, and Tonks is wonderfully brash, funny and frustrated. Just lines like Therefore she must not spend too much and embarrass both of them, but a pair of novelty reindeer socks wasn’t going to rock anyone’s feet. - instant crystal clear idea of Tonks and her personality.
It's wonderful. I'm saving it to my desktop if that's okay. Thank you so much. x
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Date: 2011-12-23 08:09 pm (UTC)It's wonderful. I'm saving it to my desktop if that's okay. Thank you so much. x